Wednesday, June 30, 2010

Planetship











amidst the cosmic stillness
lies a sentience sailing the
ocean of stars.

it quietly passes
from planet to planet
leaving no trace behind

and after slicing through
the fabric of space for as long
as it remembers,

the machine realizes
it shall call no world home
save for its hollow, encrusted
yet comforting shell.





8 comments:

Yas Jayson said...

it's always about taking chances. good luck.

Alterjon said...

yeah, good luck.

Si Direk said...

CUT!

dahil ikaw ang bida sa kwentong ito, kahit hindi ikaw ang mamimili ng ending, kelangan mo pa rin itong pagdaanan/maranasan. hindi pinahihintulutan ang lumaktaw ng kabanata.

good luck. ACTION!

PILYO said...

from PR... meaning wag seryosohin, treat him na parang si exotic number 1 and 2 lang.

Kung kelangan mo ng ayuda, ipakaliskis mo samin hahahahah. (bad ko talaga)

Désolé Boy said...

malay mo naman di ba??xa na pala..ahehe gudluck!

Guyrony said...

Jump, leap, hurdle, these are what we can do to prevent obstacles.

Piece of advice: don't expect much. You might have put him in the pedestal already.

gillboard said...

natrauma ka ba masyado sa huli mo at lahat ng bagong nagdadaan sa'yo eh hindi masyado nagtatagal?

Mu[g]en said...

May meet-up ako. Isa sa mga huli kong nakausap sa PR bago mag-delete ng account. One month na rin kami magka-text kaya pinagbigyan ko na. Dinner daw saka movie. Reminiscent lang ito nung nangyari last month.

Sa totoo worried ako. Worried ako kasi medyo nasanay na akong may sinasabihan ng "good morning" sa umaga. Nasanay rin ako na may nagrereport sa akin sa gabi na nakauwi na siya sa bahay. Worried ako na baka pagkatapos ng meet-up eh isa sa amin ang hindi na magparamdam. Parang nakakapanghinayang yung effort at pinagsamahan.

Nakakasawang pagsawaan.

Whatever happens, I will fortify myself so I would not feel vulnerable this time. Chances are, hindi ko isusulat sa blog ang mangyayari. Let it be for my own memory. Its effects however, will be felt long after. Whatever ripple it causes, will bounce on the entries that will be written in the coming month.